The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey

The graph displays the process of honey production

which

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, which

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contains

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consists

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of seven steps.

This

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happens with the help of natural resources,

such

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as flowers,

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, and evaporation.

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it starts with the swarm of

bees

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leaving the hive. They

flies

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fly

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around to find flowers.

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bees

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will land at the

center

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and suck the

nectar

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out of it.

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,

bees

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will come back to their hive and

placed

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place

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themselves on each cell. After that,

bees

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will

flaps

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their wings to make the

nectar

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fall into the cell. The process of water changing into a gas helps harden the

nectar

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and

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finally

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finally,

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honey is produced.

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cycle

keep

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keeps

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repeating all the time, since producing honey is the main role of

bees

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.