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The bar chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The bar chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
It is evident that the highest figure was experienced
Hobart
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in Hobart
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, Sydney and Melbourne fresh coffee indication,
whereas
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lowest
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the lowest
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 indicator including to
the
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apply
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Brisbane and Adelaide. We can see that among the
categories
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categories,
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 most of the citizens enjoyed going out
coffee
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to coffee
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shop
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shops
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instead
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 of
bought
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buying
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 fresh
coffees
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coffee
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 and instant coffee.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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