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The graph below shows the population of India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the
population
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 in India and China from 2000 to 2050, measured in billions.
Overall
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, the
population
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 of India will increase significantly over the period and is expected to overtake
China’s
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population
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 in 2030.
China’s
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population
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,
however
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, is predicted to decline slightly towards the end of the period. In 2000, India’s
population
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 was about 1
billion
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. Every five years, it increased by around 0.1
billion
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, reaching approximately 1.4
billion
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 by 2025. The
population
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 is expected to continue growing, but at a slower rate, and will reach its highest level in 2050. In comparison,
China’s
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population
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 was higher than India’s in 2000, at around 1.25
billion
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. It increased at a similar rate until 2030, before starting to decline. By 2050,
China’s
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population
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 is expected to fall to about 1.4
billion
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, china’s, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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