The chart presents the percentage of Canadian people who visited a certain place. It can be seen that most people chose to go to the cinema and least of them decided to visit the theatre.

The chart presents the percentage of Canadian
people
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who visited a certain place. It can be seen that most
people
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chose to go to the cinema
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least
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the least
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of them decided to visit the
theatre
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. The majority of
people
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from the yellow category (55%) visited the
library
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while
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only 10% attended the
theatre
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, which is 5.5 times less than the
library
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. The most popular choice for blue
people
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was the cinema 65% and the least popular one was the
theatre
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(25%). The
library
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and
zoo
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had approximately the same numbers, 40% for the
zoo
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and 50% for the
library
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. The
people
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belonging to the green group chose the cinema as their favourite place 70% and the
theatre
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as their least favourite
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only reaching
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20%. The
zoo
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and
library
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were standing roughly at the same spot,
library
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- 37% and
zoo
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- 41%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, theatre, library, zoo with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "presents" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cinema
  • theatre
  • visit
  • people
  • percentage
  • percent
  • figure
  • chart
  • highest
  • lowest
  • most
  • least
  • more
  • less
  • greater
  • smaller
  • popular
  • unpopular
  • gap
  • difference
  • rise
  • increase
  • fall
  • decrease
  • vary
  • show
  • indicate
  • account
  • represent
  • compare
  • contrast
  • overall
  • summary
  • there is/are
  • it can be seen that
  • by far
  • large
  • small
  • big
  • small
  • in addition
  • also
  • but
  • whereas
  • while
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