The chart below gives information on agricultural exports from the United States in 2019 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart compares
between
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different four
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agricultural
exports
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(
beef
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, pork, corn, and soybeans) in the US from 2019 to 2020, measured in $
billions
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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all four agricultural outputs showed an
increased
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throughout the period.
Although
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the soybeans had the highest figure, the
beef
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recorded the lowest
exports
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. Starting with,
beef
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exports
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accounted for just over five $
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billions
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billion dollars
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,
this
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number remained relatively stable in 2020. Compared to the
beef
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exports
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, which saw the lowest number, the
soybeans
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outputs experienced a significant
increased
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from
at
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around 20 $
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billions
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billion
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in 2019, peaking at over 25 $
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billions
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in 2020.
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, it
remaining
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the highest over the period.
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both pork and corn
agricultures
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agriculture
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witnessed a
slightly
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growth from five $
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billions
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billion dollars
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to about ten $
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billions
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billion dollars
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. They were overtaking
beef
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exports
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, beef, billions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • agricultural exports
  • trend analysis
  • export values
  • significant growth or decline
  • leading agricultural products
  • market demand
  • weather conditions
  • international trade policies
  • summarize
  • potential reasons
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