The table graph illustrates the feedback from a survey about those who participated in various cultural activities by those aged 16 years old. The figures are presented in the number of people aged.
In overview, attending performance consistently had the largest value among those above 16 age,
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computer-based had the smallest. Some categories showed a decreasing number, Linking Words
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others experienced a slight increase.
The visual arts were joined by the young generation, who were 16-24, and accounted for 30%.
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the visual arts accounted for 30%
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