The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates how many individuals own a house or if it is rented in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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, we can see that at the beginning of the period the percentage of rented accommodations was higher,

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from 1991

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the owned were lower.

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the data shown, in 1918,

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the proportion of possessed property was around 21%, but it rose to 31% in 1939 and 1953 and even more in 1961, reaching 40%. In 1971, the two data points given shared the same ratio;

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, in 1981, the number of people who bought cabins surpassed the

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who did not, and for the

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three years, they were all above 60%. As for citizens who leased homes, they were definitely a major crowd; unfortunately, they decreased to near 65% in the second and third years and even more in the fourth. After 1971, when both of them had a similar population, the rate fell to 40% in all of the next years.

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