The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008

The given line graph illustrates the amount of natural resources consumption in the US over a period of 58 years, commencing from 1950.

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, the amount of energy consumption increased over a period for all sorts of them. For about 30 years, there was no sign of two kinds of energy,

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as wind and Biofuels. At the beginning of the period, the amount of wood and hydroelectric power consumption started at well under 2 Quadrillion for each one.

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, both fluctuated to reach well over 2 units in 1980. After that, they continued to decline slightly to finish at around 2 units in 2008. Turning to other graphs, surprisingly, from 1950 to 1980, some sorts of power

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wind and

Biofuels

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Biofuels,

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were not invented. Between 1980 and 2008, there were upward trends for both of them,

while

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the figure for wind was higher than that of Biofuels throughout the timescale.

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The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In Some Countries An Increasing Number Of People Are Suffering From Health Problems As A Result Of Eating Too Much Fast Food.

Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child’s development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?