The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009

The given line graph illustrates data on
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changes for three different products over 31 years, starting from 1987.
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of all goods increased over the time scale, fresh vegetables and fruits had the highest
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, and the figure for carbonated drinks was the lowest during the timescale. At the beginning of the period, all products began at around 60. The
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of sugar and sweet products continued an upward trend to reach the peak at 100,
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it followed the same trend to finish at just under 150. In sharp contrast to
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of fresh vegetables and fruits went up significantly, after that, it dropped suddenly to well under 100, and continued to go up to reach well under 300, which was the highest
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compared to other goods. Turning to another graph,
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of carbonated drinks stood at a higher level compared to others within 3 years, it remained at the lowest amount throughout the period, and finished at just over 150 in 2009.

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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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