Some people believe that famous celebrities are poor role models for teenagers, while others think they can be a source of inspiration. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of celebrities as role models for young people.

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think that famous icons are poor

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models for our young generation,

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others think that they inspire and set a good

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Celebrities

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play a big

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in our world by influencing others or setting an

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for the community. There are plenty of advantages and

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many different opinions. So what are the advantages and

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, one of the main

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is

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people

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can influence teenagers to be determined and dedicated

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their goals. Many

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think that their dream seems impossible to reach, and are afraid to take a risk.

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why

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can make it seem easier to get to

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they set their expectations very high and work towards it

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is why a lot of them are famous now, because they believed in themselves and committed. A great

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is Lady Gaga, one of the greatest music artists of all time

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she started her

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career,

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she got rejected several times, but her motivation and courage helped her reach music

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highs. Another advantage is that a lot of

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the famous community uses their platforms to support the countries that are at war. They post or reach out on their social

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media

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how

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are suffering or even dying, to help the

worlds

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understand what is actually going on. A perfect

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of

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is Bella Hadid. She is a supermodel

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speaks about the war

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going on in Palestine

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she lost many of her

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jobs and contracts

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, it shows how humble and selfless she is.

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there are a few

disadvantages

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of

celebrities

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being

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models for young

people

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. One of the biggest

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is that

celebrities

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are really unrealistic. They want to show the world that their life is great and how beautiful they are,

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it is the complete opposite in real life. It can cause teenagers to develop insecurities because famous

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set unreal beauty standards.

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an influencer posts a picture,they look absolutely stunning,

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in real

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life,

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those photos were completely edited by professionals. Another disadvantage is,

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influence negative

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well they can be poor

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models. Famous

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are always followed around by journalists and commentators

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in most

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they are very disrespectful and arrogant. To illustrate, a teenager is scrolling on social media and sees a video of a celebrity

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a party being inappropriate, and thinks

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completely normal and casual

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how

celebrities

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can be a bad

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model for the young generation. In conclusion, I think that there are more advantages than

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Celebrities

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are more likely

inspiring

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to

teenagers

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inspire teenagers

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rather than

promoting

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bad behaviour.