The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002

The given bar chart illustrates data on the
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of minutes spent on telephone calls in the UK related to three different tools from 1995 to 2004.
Overall
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,
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the
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of minutes related to local-landline decreased over the period, these figures for national and international lines and mobiles increased.
To begin
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with, between 1995 and 2001, the
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of minutes for local-landline increased sharply to reach the peak at just over 16000 in 2001,
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it continued to decline to finish at just under 12000 in 2004. Turning to other tools, in 1995,
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international and national lines began at just under 6000,
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for mobiles was of minor significance. After that, they both followed to go up to reach the same amount
at the end
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of the period, just around 10000 for both devices.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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