The line graph illustrates the usage of four different social media platforms by individuals aged from 30 to 45 in New Zealand during 2018.

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, it's evident from the graph that the number of people using Facebook was the highest among all platforms throughout the

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users

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the number of Twitter users reported the least. In general, Facebook visitors experienced a slight reduction. Starting at just above 45%, followed by a gradual decrease, to reach around 37%, before it rises to 40% by July. Towards the end of the

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30% by December.

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, started at less than 45% in January. At

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point, the trend showed a dramatic decline during the period shown, ending the

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with nearly 10% .

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, Pinterest varied between 5% and 10% during the time period.

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The line graph illustrates the usage of four different social media platforms by individuals aged from 30 to 45 in New Zealand during 2018.

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