You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unabled to continue doing this work. Write a letter to your manager of the organization where you have been working. *describe the work you have been doing *explain why you can no longer do this work * recommend another person choice interested in the work.

Dear
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Mike, I am writing to inform you about my decision about the voluntary work that
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been doing for the past five months. I was teaching maths and computer skills to all our community students during my leisure hours. Unfortunately, I will not be able to continue my teaching
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as I obtained my full-time Job in a primary school, located in Red Deer.
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, I am planning to relocate to any place closer to the school as it will be more convenient for me because classes
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at 7 AM in the morning. If
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may, I would like to recommend my friend Julie as a replacement, because I know that you will be looking for a suitable candidate. She has finished her college degree and
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3 years of experience in teaching, so I believe that
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opportunity will help her to enhance her teaching skills. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Jeevitha S

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task response
Explain more about the work you did. Add a small detail of what you taught and to whom, so the reader sees the task clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear gaps between ideas. Put one main idea in each paragraph and link ideas with simple words like and, but, so, then.
language use
Check spelling and grammar in parts like 'I', 'starts', and 'have'. Try to use present perfect and past simple correctly.
tone
Polite and formal tone throughout the letter.
content
The letter shows why you stop and who can take your place.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • voluntary work
  • local community
  • manager
  • organization
  • charitable
  • public spaces
  • tutoring services
  • discontinuation
  • relocation
  • health issues
  • family responsibilities
  • recommendation
  • interested in
  • skills
  • experience
  • service-oriented
  • replacement
  • dedicated
  • commitment
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