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The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.

The line graph illustrates the number of
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 delivered by Federal Express and
TNT
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Mail
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Services
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 between 1920 and 2000.
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, the diagram shows that Federal Express was people's favourite
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 service company in 1920,
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TNT
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Mail
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 gained popularity gradually and delivered the largest number of
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at the end
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 of the 20th century. In 1920, the most popular
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 service company was Federal Express, which delivered around 15000
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. Percel's distribution from Federal Express reached a peak in 1940
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 just below 25000.
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,
TNT
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Mail
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Services
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 only delivered just over 5000
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 in 1920. Delivery from
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mail
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services
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 increased gradually and reached around 12000
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 in 1960.
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, from 1930 to 1960, Federal Express experienced a decline and reached its lowest delivery, with a figure of about 13000. Parcel deliveries kept rising in
TNT
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Mail
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Services
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 in the latter part of the 20th century. It saw a significant rise in deliveries in 1990
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 and recorded around 24000 deliveries in 2000.
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, Federal Express saw an upward trend in its delivery
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, and finished the century with a
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figure of
 around 18000 by 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words parcels, tnt, mail, services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "express" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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