The diagrams below show the layout of a library five years ago and the current plan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map
show
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shows
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the
library
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model five years ago and the current plan.
Overall
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, in the
library
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removed one
room
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and
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was removed and
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added
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apply
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two new.
S et
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Set
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up new tables in the
middle
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.
Also
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, changed
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the name
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name
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names
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of
rooms
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the rooms
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.  5 years ago
in
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, in
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the
libraryvat
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library, on
the left
side
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bottom
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, bottom
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there
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, there
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were three rooms
:
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:
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classroom
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a classroom
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,
recording
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a recording
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room
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, borrowing and returning desk. At the top and at the
bottom&nbsp
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bottom
;
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,
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in the
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middle
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middle,
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there were
book shelves
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bookshelves
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and in the
middle
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four
studying
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study
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tables.
At
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On
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the right
side
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from
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of
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a
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the
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wall
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wall,
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there was
desk
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a desk
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for computers. In the bottom
library
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office.  In
current
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the current
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plan
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plan,
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there are several changes.
In
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On
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the left
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side
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side,
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removed recording
room
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, added
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was removed, added
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recording studio and
seperated
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the
borrowing and returning desks
.
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were separated.
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In the
middle
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added two tables
and
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, and
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it becomes private.
Also
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,
in
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apply
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the bottom desks
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were
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changed to
desk
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desks
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for student laptops.
Right
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The right
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side
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fully
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has fully
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changed names. The computer desks now provide laptops
and
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, and
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library
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the library
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office
changed
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has been changed
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to
conference
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a conference
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room
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. 

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, middle, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.
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