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Writing Samples
Band 3

It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
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 modern era, it is believed that purchasing limited branded
clothes
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are
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is
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 good enough, rather than buying too much of the cheaper stuff. I disagree with the phenomenon and admire that cost-effective
clothes
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 are convenient for wearing at work and affordable.
To begin
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 with, people are spending money on cheaper
clothes
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, because they prefer to wear
those
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them
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on
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their work. Many times, folks need to perform distinct activities, which ruin their belongings, so they do not need to worry,
while
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 having affordable
clothes
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.
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, the reports from employers indicate that in the United Kingdom, jobs like forklifting, packing and cooking put the unremovable stains on workers' clothing that warn them to wear normal
clothes
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.
Furthermore
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,
the
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apply
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human beings can buy
a
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different types of
clothes
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according to
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 alternative events. The people do not want to repeat their dresses on particular functions
,
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;
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 if they might wear the same dress, it gives them the feeling of shamefulness. So getting enough suits
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at in
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in
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an
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 affordable price is a great idea.
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, the survey held in 2024
was
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showed that more than 60% of women wanted to buy more, even
their
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though their
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wardrobe
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wardrobes
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is
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are
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 full of
clothes
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, the reason behind
this
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 is that they had already uploaded pictures
with
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of
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 remaining stuff on social media.
To conclude
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,
although
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 some people want
less
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fewer
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 but branded
clothes
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. I think that buying affordable
clothes
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 will not only satisfy
ones
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one's
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 mind but
also
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 reduce
fear
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the fear
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 of damaging it.

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task
Open with a clear view on the topic in one line.
task
Give 2-3 main points that support your view, with a simple example for each.
task
End with a short conclusion that restates your view.
coherence
Use linking words to connect ideas; start each paragraph with a topic sentence.
coherence
Add more clear examples that fit the claim; avoid loose or off topic notes.
language
Check spelling and fix big grammar issues; keep words simple.
idea
Clear view is seen in the essay.
structure
Some reasons and examples are given.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • long-lasting
  • cost-per-wear
  • economical
  • investing
  • ethical manufacturing
  • transparent
  • exclusivity
  • designs
  • mass-produced
  • accessibility
  • budget
  • fast fashion
  • trends
  • maintenance
  • dry cleaning
  • social status
  • psychological implications
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