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Artificial intelligence is becoming more common in schools and universities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development for students?

The issue of schools and universities using artificial
intelligence
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 is becoming more common for educational purposes.
While
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 it is true that artificial
intelligence
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 would make
students
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 overly dependent and it
also
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 has the potential for inaccurate
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, it can
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 aid
students
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 in terms of their assignment
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,
such
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 as essays and class projects.
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, Artificial
intelligence
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 would support
students
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 in their creativity. On the one hand, a major disadvantage of artificial
intelligence
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 is AI would make
students
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 overly dependent. The student that likely to open a search engine would be less likely to use their logic, because the sophistication of AI has made the student indifferent to doing anything.
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, it can
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 be problematic
due to
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 the potential for inaccurate
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 that AI would make from
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 and patterns that it has in memory. AI works on the
data
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 that it has, and it has a great opportunity to have wrong
data
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 that can lead to misinformation.
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, in 2023, many users reported that ChatGPT occasionally mentions dates or historical
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 that are incorrect,
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 as the first human landing on the moon in 1968,
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 the actual date is 1969.
On the other hand
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, Artificial
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also
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 offers the advantage of aiding
students
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 with their assignment
tasks
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. Many
students
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 were helped with artificial
intelligence
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 in their homework
tasks
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,
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 as paperwork and research, with the AI's biggest ability for searching for good
information
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that is
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 compatible with
students
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. Another benefit is that AI would support
students
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 in their creativity. AI will provide feedback and suggestions when
students
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 share their creative ideas with the
intelligence
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 systems.
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, machine
intelligence
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 will aid
students
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 when they need to brainstorm for a writing task, not to help with answering the task. In conclusion, there are some concerns about whether artificial
intelligence
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 would make
students
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 overly dependent and
also
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 has the potential for inaccurate
information
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.
Nonetheless
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, AI would aid
students
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 in terms of their assignment
tasks
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 and support
students
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 in their creativity.

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Structure
Plan a short intro that states both good and bad points of AI in school, then a clear set of ideas in body paragraphs, and a simple conclusion.
Language use
Use clear, short sentences. Some long sentences can be split for easy read.
Coherence
Use linking words well. The essay uses 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand'. Keep this pattern to show compare and contrast.
Content
Check facts before giving dates or events. A factual error can hurt the score.
Content
Give a clear example for each main point. Make sure the example fits the point.
Content
The writer tries to discuss both sides.
Organization
Uses contrast words like 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand'.
Content
Some ideas are relevant to the task.
Your opinion

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