Mrs barrett,an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs barrett. In your letter •suggest how you could help her in her home •say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available.

Dear Mrs

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, I am writing in regards to the recent advertisement posted in a daily newspaper that you are looking for a home assistant to help you with daily chores few hours a day next summer. I am interested

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in applying

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for

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position, as I can provide assistance by cleaning dishes, washing clothes, taking care of pets, and gardening as well. I am a student

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St. Claire

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University

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, looking for a part-time job in

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the summer

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to support funding for my education, as you know

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, studying

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without

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apply

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financial aid is much difficult to manage both personal and school expenses.

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, I am interested in doing

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activities because helping someone makes

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me feel

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better as it improves my mental well-being.

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, I am available in the morning from 8 AM -11AM , incase, if you prefer

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evening schedule, I can be available from 5 PM -7 PM. I'd

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apply

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be grateful if you could provide me

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this

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with this

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opportunity as it will be helpful for my financial burden. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest

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convenience

. Yours sincerely, Jeevitha S

jeeanay

Dec 27, 2025

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task response

You answer all parts of the task, but keep the language clear and steady. The ideas are present, but some lines are a bit long and hard to read.

coherence cohesion

Make the flow smooth by using short, linked steps. Put each idea in its own short part and use simple link words like 'and', 'but', 'also' to join ideas.

tone

Keep a formal tone. Fix small rule errors and rare misspells so the read stays easy. Use 'Dear Mrs Barrett' and 'Yours sincerely' with the comma.

content

The writer says what help he can give and why he wants the job.

tone

The letter uses a polite, respectful note that suits a job request.

structure

Clear time slots are given for availability.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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