The map below shows 2 possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new super market planned for the town of GARLSDON

The map illustrates the future plan of two possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new supermarket for the
town
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of Garlsdon with 65000
population
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. Garlsdon
town
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is placed between three towns , first,Hindon in the east , north of the
town
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with 10,000
population
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, and 12km away.
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Brandson , which is located in Western South with 16
km
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and a
population
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of 15000.
Third,
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Carnnsdon
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Carnsdon
is in the eastern south , 25
km
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away and
29000
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has 29000
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population
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.
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, the first proposed site is located in the countryside,
while
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the second one is planned to be in the
town
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centre with no traffic zone. There is a railway crossing the
town
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from the eastern south to the western north. In terms of the site S1, it is located outside the industry, above the railway and close to the north housing area.
This
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location is 12
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from Hindon , which has 10,000
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.
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, S1 is located in the domain of the main road. The other proposed site , S2
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is planned to be inside the industry region and the
town
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centre.
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, S2 is under the railway, and in an area with no traffic jams.
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, it is north of the southern housing area.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, population, km with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • site selection
  • supermarket
  • residential areas
  • main roads
  • public transport
  • traffic congestion
  • peak shopping hours
  • parking availability
  • suppliers
  • delivery logistics
  • amenities
  • shopper convenience
  • environmental implications
  • green spaces
  • urban development
  • economic development
  • job creation
  • local businesses
  • market saturation
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