The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2)emissions per person in the United Kingdom,Sweden,Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The average carbon dioxide
emissions
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per person for four countries between 1967 and 2007 are shown in
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line graph.
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the data for the UK has been decreasing
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, its value was maximum all the time. The per
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emissions
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in Italy and Portugal have been increasing
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in Sweden, the trend was an increase first and
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a decrease. In 1967, the data for the UK
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around 10.8. During the 40 years, it steadily decreased to around 8.8 in 2007. Italy and Portugal had similar trends. From 1967 to 2007, Italy's
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rose from around 4.2 to 7.8, and Portugal's rose from around 1.2 to 5.2. Sweden's
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first increased to a maximum of 10.2 in 1977 and
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decreased sharply. In 2007, its
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were the same as Portugal.
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, in the period of 40 years, the per carbon dioxide
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of these four countries showed different trends
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the UK and Sweden, as developed countries, had a falling trend in
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Italy and Portugal demonstrated a steady increase. These different trends reflect the differences in industrial development and environmental protection.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, year with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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