The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

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residents

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of residents

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donating money to charity in the UK among five different age groups over a period of 20

years

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, starting from 1990.

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, in

1990

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1990,

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those who were

at

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between

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the

age

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ages

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of 36-50

tend

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tended

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to money much more

to

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money to

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charity,

while

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this

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figure was the highest for 51-60

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years

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apply

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in 2010.

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with, the percentage of people giving money to charity from 18 to 50

years

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dcreased

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decreased

over the period

,

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;

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those who were at the age of 18-25 were in

minority

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the minority

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throughout the period. In sharp contrast to

this

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,

altough

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although

this

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number

form

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from

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51-65 to over 65 began at just under 35% and well over 30% respectively, both went up by 4%-6% in 2010.

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, the

porporation

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proportion

of 51-65

years

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was

dominated one

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dominant

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in 2010.