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The graph below gives information about the number of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured in four different countries from 2020 to 2035
Overall
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, the
number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured in Japan, the UK and the USA is predicted
decrease
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to decrease
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 from 2020 to 2035.
whereas
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china
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China
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 only the
country
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 will supposedly
a
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have a
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considerable increase
comprared
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compared
 to
three
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the three
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 other
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country
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countries
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. In
Japan
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Japan,
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 the production of
car
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cars
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 is set to decline sharply from 2025 to 2035 In 2035, the
number
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 of
cars
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 made in
USA
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the USA
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 is forecasted to fall markedly from 300.000 to just over less than 100.000
cars
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is
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apply
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produced. Out of
there
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there,
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The
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the
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 UK is
also
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 expected to decrease significantly in 2035. Japan is the leading
country
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 in the production of
cars
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 in 2020, but
from
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apply
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after
2025
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2025,
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 merked reduced when it
drops
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dropped
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 from 400.000 to 100.000
Otherwise
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, China is predicted to be the only
country
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 with
significant
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a significant
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 growth rate. With the
number
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 100.000
cars
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 in 2020. China has developed continuously for 15
year
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years
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 and
become
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has become
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the
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a
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country
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 with the largest
number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured
almost
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, almost
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 150.000 in 2035

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cars, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • projection
  • statistical
  • to soar
  • to fluctuate
  • steady
  • noteworthy
  • incremental
  • exponential
  • forecast
  • saturate
  • plateau
  • peak
  • trend
  • implications
  • automotive industry
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