The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram depicts the manufacturing process of
bamboo
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fabric from
bamboo
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trees.
Overall
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, there are nine stages which commence with the plantation of
bamboo
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plants and end with the preparation of clothes.
Initially
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,
bamboo
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plants are grown during the spring season.
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, it is harvested manually during the autumn period. After that,the harvested
bamboo
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stems are cut into strips using the
machineries
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machinery
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. Later, the prepared
bamboo
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strips are crushed and
then
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added
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a liquid,
such
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as water to transform it into a liquid pulp.
Next,
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the long fibre particles are separated, utilising a
funnel shaped
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filter. In the following step, water and chemicals, particularly the amine oxide, are added to soften the filtered
fibers
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fibres
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. Later, using the processed fibre, a thread ball is prepared by spinning. After that, fabric is manufactured by weaving the threads.
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, different kinds of customised clothes
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such
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, such
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as socks and t-shirts, are prepared from that fabric.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bamboo with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bamboo
  • fabric
  • cloth
  • fiber
  • yarn
  • thread
  • weave
  • knit
  • stages
  • steps
  • process
  • harvest
  • cut
  • crush
  • break
  • fiber
  • spin
  • weave
  • finish
  • wash
  • dye
  • color
  • soft
  • strong
  • material
  • final
  • make
  • from
  • to
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