The map below is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram

illustrate

Correct subject-verb agreement

illustrates

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the layout of Garlsdon

town

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, where the new supermarket was planned to

placed

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be placed

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Overall

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, there are over 65,000

population

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people

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residing in

this

Linking Words

town

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and placing the supermarket in the

town

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centre seems more advantageous to diverse populations. The planned sites

includes

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include

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northwestern

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the northwestern

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region of the countryside and

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apply

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the

town

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centre, particularly named S1 and S2 respectively. S2

site

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is more accessible to people as it is

closed

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to good transportation services

including

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, including

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a railway and main road. Individuals residing in Cransdon have

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a 25

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km distance to reach the S2 and can use both railways and main roads.

Similary

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Similarly

, Hindon population can

also

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utilise both the railways and main roads to visit the S2

which

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, which

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is nearly half of the distance less than that for Cransdon. Despite having only 16km, Bransdon people have to use only

main

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the main

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road to travel the S2.

Additionally

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, S2 is covered by

housing

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a housing

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area

making

Punctuation problem

, making

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the

site

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more suitable to be chosen.

Additionally

Linking Words

Correct article usage

the S2

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site

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is less reachable to populations. Bransdon people cannot travel to

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the S1

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site

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, as there

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are

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no direct transportation services to reach the place.

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Jan 3, 2026

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, site with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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