The graph below shows the per capita consumption of whole milk and low-fat milk in the United States between 1970 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This
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line graph compares the per capita
consumption
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of whole
milk
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and low-fat
milk
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in the United States during 1970 and 2015.
Overall
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, whole
milk
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consumption
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decreased,
while
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the
consumption
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of low-fat
milk
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increased over the given period. There was a dramatic fall in the amount of whole
milk
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consumption
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per capita in
United
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States. It stood at 25
gallons
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in 1970,higher than the other type of
milk
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.The two types of
consumptions
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consumption
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were
in
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at
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the same level in 1990, they reached at just under 15
gallons
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.
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, the
consumption
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level of whole
milk
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declined sharply over the next 25 years to finish at 5
gallons
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in 2015. Low-fat
Milk
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started at just over 5
gallons
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in 1970,
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it saw a
gradually
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rise,reaching approximately 14
gallons
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in 1990. After
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it remained constant till 2010. There was
also
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a small decrease in the amount of low-fat
milk
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consumption
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.
At the end
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of the given period,it levelled
of
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at
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5
gallons
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,which was the lowest of that period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, milk, gallons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • comparison
  • preference
  • significant
  • decline
  • rise
  • trend
  • gradual
  • surpass
  • pattern
  • shift
  • healthier options
  • approximately
  • amount
  • between
  • overall
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