The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figure

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report is based on a table which illustrates the
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of secondary and high school teachers in five different countries in 2009. A glance at the graph reveals that Luxembourg recorded the highest
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from the start until after 15
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, in comparison to Australian
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were the lowest. Not only is
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point clear, but Korea, Japan, and even Denmark
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show
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Middle range is between Australia and Luxembourg. Notably, the
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in Luxembourg started at $80,000 ,
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after 15
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became $190,000 and reached their maximum of $132,000 over 30
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,
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the
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initially
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started at $28,000 in Australia and it maximum of $48,000 within 9
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. It is
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in Korea and Japan, the
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begin
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range
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the range
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of about $30,000 to $34,000,
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in Korea, Korean teachers' incomes steadily increase until it's reach their maximum at $62,000 over 34
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.
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, in Japan, teachers'
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initially
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significantly rose to $86,000 over 37
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,
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in Denmark, the
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slowly increased from $45,000 to $54,000 over 8
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, initially, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual salaries
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • global differences
  • economic disparities
  • valuation
  • compensation
  • socio-economic status
  • investment in education
  • regional similarities
  • living costs
  • government funding
  • qualification requirements
  • demand for teachers
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