The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

The diagram illustrates how items that contain

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are being manufactured.

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, we can see that there are several steps to the process;

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,

it is clear that

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the

producing

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cycle has transportation stages to it, and it is not generated in one building.

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the data given, the very first step is drying the skin

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came

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from the animals in the farm; after that, they transfer the skin by a massive vehicle to the factory where the

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process begins. They add the goods to the washing machine, which contains water and lime to clean the skin very well, and

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add

it

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to a vessel that has lime in it only.

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, the tanning phase starts; in

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phase

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they soak the fleece in a container that has water and vegetable matter.

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step helps thicken the object. The workers start to place the

leather

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in the machine to flatten it. After

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the polishing phase begins;

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step is crucial since it helps protect the

leather

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and make it shinier.

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they start shipping the

leather

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to factories to start shaping it

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sell it at shops.