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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The image
illustrate
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 the floor
designe
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design
 of a national library
before
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20 years ago and how it
change
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has changed
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 now.
Firstly
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,
Clildren's
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Children's
books
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 area was on the
right
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 corner
up
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of the library and
now
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has now
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shifted
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been shifted
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 to
left
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the left
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 side with two sofas for
the
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storytelling activities.
Secondly
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, Tables and chairs
removed
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were removed
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form
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from
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 the central hallway and
placed
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a Cafe
instade
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was placed
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 in the
right
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 corner
down
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instead
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.
Thirdly
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, in the middle of the library
from
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, from
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 left to
the
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right
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 there was one section for adult fiction
books
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 and another one for non-fiction
books
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but
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, but
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 now it
become
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has become
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into
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all reference
books
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in
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on
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 the left side.
Moreover
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, the
right
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 side contains adult
ficition
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fiction
books
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,
information
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an information
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 desk and self-service machines.
Lastly
Linking Words
, a reading room
replaced
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to
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by
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 a computer room.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, right with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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