The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below gives information about the material of leather and how produced.
Overall
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, the diagram consists of 10 stages, starting with drying and chemical treatment of the raw hides, and finishing with products
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as clothes, bags, and shoes.
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with, from the first stage, there is a raw material which is from animal skin, and it dries in a special hanger. After that , it is loaded in a truck which delivers it to the factory.
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, the animal skin has to be in special water for washing with lime, and after that, it should be soaked in that water. Continuing, with that the leather must be flattened in a special machine technique, and after that there is a second step where the leather is immersed in Tannin water into which includes vegetable and with that the material should be soaked. And
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there is a stage where the material should be polished to get in shape. At the
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, it is delivered in a truck to the second factory, and there it produces lots of products
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as balloons, shoes, and bags.

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