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Band 5

Your friend invited you to a party but you could not attend. Write a short email to apologize. In your email: say sorry explain why you could not attend suggest meeting another time

Dear Sir/Madam, 🌷I am writing to formally raise my concern regarding the current situation, as
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 issue has already had a noticeable impact on my personal arrangements and has created a degree of uncertainty regarding my future decisions. 🌸
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 I acknowledge that
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, the present situation has resulted in unexpected complications, making it increasingly difficult for me to plan effectively in the near future.
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, I would be grateful if you could clarify whether any alternative solutions or temporary measures are currently being considered to mitigate the effects of
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 situation. Thank you for your time and attention to
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 matter. I look forward to receiving a detailed and timely response. Yours sincerely, Ronaldo Cristiano ⚽

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structure
Use short lines. One idea per paragraph.
task
Be clear about your goal in the first sentence.
coherence
Add more links to show how ideas fit together.
tone
Remove emojis in a formal letter.
content
Add one or two real details or examples to back up what you say.
overall
Polite and formal tone.
structure
Clear sign-off and closing.
content
Respectful ask for information.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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