The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The pictures

shown

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show

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the development of the town in Norbiton from now to

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future

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the future

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Overall

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The

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the

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map illustrates more facilities for the

future

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;

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the housing

area

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will be increased in development. People can see in situated on

North

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the North

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side

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side,

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there will be built a bridge and people can cross the river easily.

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, the Farmland will be replaced by

the

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apply

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housing. Moving on

the

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to the

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area

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which is surrounded by factories will be replaced with housing in the

future

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. At the same time, the housing

area

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planned will house

school

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a school

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, play

ground

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in the

future

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map. At the

center

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centre

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of the map, there is a roundabout situated at the

center

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of the road. In

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future

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future,

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there will be built the shops and medical center near

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apply

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the biggest roundabout. What

even

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is even

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more in the planned

future

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development there will be constructed a new traffic circle under the main roundabout.

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, a new road will be built to

expend

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expand

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the residential

area

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which is located in the Northwest of the main roundabout.

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Jan 6, 2026

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words future, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
gentrification

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