The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below provides a graphical representation of car ownership in Britain between the
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1971 to 2007.
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, it is evident that dealers with no
cars
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decreased drastically through the
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,
whereas
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those with two
cars
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increased.
Initially
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, ownerships with no
cars
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were at 47% in 1971, but they began to decline through the
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.
This
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group ended at less than 30% in the final
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. Contrary to
this
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pattern, the dealers with one car kicked off at 45% and remained unchanged through the
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, but only with a slight decrease to roughly 41% in the final
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. In sharp contrast to the previous
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mentioned, ownerships with two
cars
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had a spontaneous increase over the
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. They kicked off at less than 10% in the first
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and began to rise as the
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go
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by. Ultimately, they estimated a total of 25% in 2007.
Finally
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, the
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on the graph falls under three or more
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, which had a disappointing turnout
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compared to
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the rest of the ownerships. Progressively, they started off at 1% in 1971 with very slow development through the
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to end at roughly 7% in 2007.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, cars, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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