The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and of women working in different occupations.

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wage
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wages
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man
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men
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women
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several jobs in
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various
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in 2015. When looking, we will notice that
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average
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salaries
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man
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men rises
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very rise ,
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drop significantly in
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. At the beginning of the working
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higher
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around 1400 ,
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women
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women's
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wage
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law about 900 in 2015.
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men
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labor
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in professional they receive
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nearly 2000, but compared to
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approximately
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1900 .
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, Average weekly wages by jobs in 2014. Some
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give
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salaries
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like
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manual
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men
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almost 1100 . Through of the woman they are paid very
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in the same occupation of the
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some 850 in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words man, women, salaries, week with synonyms.
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