The pie chart and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during the 1990s and 2010s, and the availability of different types of accommocation in London during the same two periods.

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derives from the listed pie and table charts, which enumerate the correlation of different types of living accommodation in London by the 1990s, 2010s, and 2018. 5 categories of accommodation provided alongside prices for rent of 1-2 or 3-4 bedroom apartments. At first glance, it can be seen that the share of rent on shared houses ramped up to a decent level from the 90s to the 2010s, followed by a double demand for shared flats in London. The share of single living houses marginally depleted over the years ,
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the proportion of flat renters , to a minimum.
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with, accommodation costs in London in 1990 compared to the 2010s have encountered a vigorous downturn trend, starting from 34,000 to 32,000 for 1-2 bedroom houses and flats , to 12,000 and 10,000.
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, the price for households for 3-4 people varies slightly
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from 47,000 to 48,500, which is the highest price in 2 decades.
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, the 1990s flat rent price diminished significantly from 39,000 to 32,000.

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