The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below represents the total amount of spreads in
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that have been utilised from the
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1981 to 2007.
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, it is evident that the highest amount consumed is allocated to butter spread,
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the least falls under the low-fat and reduced spreads. Progressively, the butter spreads kicked off at slightly above 140
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in the first
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. More so, their progress was continuous till they reached a peak at 160
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in 1986.
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, there was a decline , which was gradual but progressive , to less than 60
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in 2007.
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, the Margarine spread fluctuated along the graph. The spread began at roughly 92
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in the first
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and
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declined for only a short period, only to rise again in 1991 before a final decline to end at 40
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in the final
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.
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, in sharp contrast to the previous spreads, the low-fat and reduced spreads started off in the
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1996 at less than 20grams and had a spontaneous spike to about 80grams in 2001 before a drastic decrease to less than 80
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in the
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year
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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