The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.
Overall
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,
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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generally
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are generally
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not interested in the same
subject
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subjects
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.
Male
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Males
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chose
obviusly
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obviously
science and maths
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by
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, by
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contrast
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contrast,
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female
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females
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chose social sciences and language
lesson
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lessons
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. In
the
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apply
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detail,
university
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the university
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have
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has
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8
subject
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subjects
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and
approxiametly
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approximately
200 students.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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