The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.

Overall

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male

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males

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and

female

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females

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generally

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are generally

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not interested in the same

subject

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subjects

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Male

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Males

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chose

obviusly

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obviously

science and maths

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, by

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contrast

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contrast,

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female

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females

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chose social sciences and language

lesson

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lessons

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. In

the

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apply

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detail,

university

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the university

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have

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has

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subject

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subjects

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and

approxiametly

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approximately

200 students.

illyy.damla

Jan 13, 2026

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

50 words

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