The pie chart below shows the proportions of household spending on five different categories (housing, food, transport, healthcare and entertainment) in a country in 2020.

The pie chart shows the proportions of household spending on five different categories (housing, food, transport, healthcare and entertainment) in a country in 2020.

Overall

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it is clear that

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housing accounted for the largest proportion,

while

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entertainment made up the smallest share.

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The pie chart below shows the proportions of household spending on five different categories (housing, food, transport, healthcare and entertainment) in a country in 2020.

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

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More and more citizens relying on private cars as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion.