The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton park and a plan for proposed changes.

The map
is
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isllustrate
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illustrates
the current layout of
park
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the park
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and its proposed design after the planned developments
completed
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are completed
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.
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overall
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, the area is expected to undergo
significaent
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significant
changes. The main developments include new buildings
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while
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some existing structures will remain unchanged.
currently
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, Park is
center
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around the lake. Surrounding
this
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area are
bulidings
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buildings
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while
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playground
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the playground
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is located to the north.
under
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the proposed plan, several major
will
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changes will
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be
inroduced
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introduced
.
Deck
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will be replaced by
new
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a new
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entrance
and
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, and
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road
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the road
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will be converted
in
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to hall. In
addtion
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addition
, new facilities
such
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as
tannies
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court
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Court
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will be
conctrcted
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constructed
to improve living
condition
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conditions
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.

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