The government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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this

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contemporary world , maintaining a healthy diet could be challenging. In doing so, everybody is trying to

intake

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consume

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organic

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to enhance their health. To inculcate it as a daily habit, some people consider it the responsibility of the government

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whereas

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others believe it is a personal choice.

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essay will shed light on both the views and provide evidence to prove the arguments. In order to ensure that people have wholesome

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food

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the government have to implement regulations and advertise the importance of a healthy diet. In recent times, there has been a surge in fast

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chains

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without proper laws and restrictions, these outlets could exploit.

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to restrict that government has to impose heavy taxes and regular inspection on

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safety.

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, the policy-makers should advertise the importance of consuming natural

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and its benefits to the human body.

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, in countries like Japan, South Korea and other Asian cities, authorities maintain a strict regime on fast

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outlets and encourage the public to eat vegetables or home-cooked meals.

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apply

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the authorities bring out policies on

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,

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of the day , it all depends on the particular individuals to have healthy

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. The present generation tends to prefer fast

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over organic supplements mainly for its taste and cost efficiency.

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, a hamburger at McDonald's costs around 5 dollars

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that

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is prepared instantly and

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tastes good

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wholesome

food

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is a bit costly and takes time to prepare.

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, in a recent survey conducted by Brown University, the majority of American citizens are facing problems like obesity, heart failures, and

diabities

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diabetes

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over-reliance on greasy

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. In conclusion, even though the authorities implement and advertise the significance of natural

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, it all comes

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the

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interests in what kind of

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intake helps in maintaining a healthy body.