The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced. Summarise the important information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the production of orange

juice

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and in which way they

are

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sold.

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, the process is a self-contained system comprising three important stages, beginning with

the

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apply

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delivering fresh oranges to a factory and ending with packaging and delivering to supermarkets. At the beginning of the process, fresh oranges are

delivering

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delivered

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by truck to the factory.

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they are washed. After washing, the oranges are extracted by special equipment from

peel

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the peel

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Remaining

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The Remaining

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solid waste

are

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used as food for animals. Once the fresh

juice

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has been

maked

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made

, they are

are

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packed and ready for delivery to the supermarkets. There

are

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another way how pack fresh juices. Fresh

juice

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that

are

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taken from extraction

are

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moving in the

refrigated

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refrigerated

truck to the evaporation

center

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centre

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. Fresh

juice

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are

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removed from water through

evaporation

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the evaporation

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method. After which, the fresh

juice

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are

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concentrated. 

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they are canned into cans. The canned juices are

send

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sent

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to the warehouse. By the end of the

process

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process,

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they are

send

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sent

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factory

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the factory

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, where

are

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water is

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added

water

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apply

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. Ready juices are packed and delivered to the supermarkets.

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Jan 14, 2026

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Vocabulary: Replace the words juice with synonyms.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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179 words

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