Some people say that protecting the environment is the government ‘s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In recent years, protecting the environment has become a growing debate.
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some people argue that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility, others believe that everyone should play an active role. In my opinion,
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are a vital leader
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protecting the environment, but individuals' efforts are
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part of it. Those who believe that environmental protection is primarily the responsibility of
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argue that only authorities have sufficient resources and power to make a real difference
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administration can introduce environmental laws, inspect factories, invest in related projects
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as renewable energy, sustainable energy and public transportation.
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, strict regulations on carbon emission can significantly reduce pollution
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these are some things that individuals cannot achieve on their own.
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, supporters of
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view endorse and trust
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governments
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play a key role in environmental protection.
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, many people believe that individual effort cannot be ignored, simple actions
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as reducing waste, intention to use recycled and environmentally friendly materials and using public transport can collectively have a significant impact.
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, if every citizen lacks proper awareness, the government's policies and monitoring might become indispensable. As
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result,
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governments
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set the direction, environmental protection cannot succeed without the
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participation In conclusion, environmental problems are complex and persistent
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unity is the key to solving the problems. I believe through
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the governments
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guidance and public action. environmental problems can be effectively solved

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structure
Use a clear opening that states your view and a clear ending that restates it in simple words.
coherence
Link ideas with small, simple words. Use 'and', 'but', 'so', 'also' to show order.
content
Give more clear reasons and examples for each view. Do not mix ideas in one sentence.
task response
You show both sides and give your own view.
coherence
You use an example of carbon rules to show effect.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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