The diagram shows how sugar is produced from sugar cane. Summarise the important information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The picture illustrates the manufacture of

sugar

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from

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sugar

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the sugar

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cane plant. 

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, the

process

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constitutes a

discreate

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discrete

system encompassing seven key stages, commencing with growing

sugar

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canes and culminating with drying and cooling the

sugar

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.  At the inception of the

process

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sugar

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canes grow from 12

to18

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to 18

months. There are two ways

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in how

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how

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which

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it is

harvest

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harvested

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by using the special machine and

second,

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with the usage of human physical

strenght

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strength

. After harvesting, the

sugar

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canes are crushed by

specialized

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specialised

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machinery.

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of crushing,

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the stands

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stands out juice

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juice stands out

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, the juice

cleaned

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was cleaned

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via limestone filler. The cleaned juice is sent to

evaporator

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the evaporator

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. In

this

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equipment, it

becomes syrup

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syrup becomes

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heated.

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this

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process

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sugar

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crystals are

seperating

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separated

from

syrup

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the syrup

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in the centrifuge machine. By the culmination of the

process

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sugar

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drying

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dried

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and

cooling

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cooled

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Jan 16, 2026

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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134 words

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