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Many organisations and companies ask their staff to wear a uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? What kind of jobs should have a work uniform?

It is common for
staff
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 in organisations and companies to be told to wear
uniforms
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.
This
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 practice has its positives and negatives for the company and its
staff
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, and it is suitable for certain
jobs
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. One major advantage of wearing a
uniform
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 in the office is that it makes
work
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 safer. When the
staff
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 are out in the field, they are safer with a wearpack, which allows them to do their
work
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 without risk.
Jobs
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 like firefighting require a must-wear
safety
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uniform
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.
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, wearing a
uniform
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 increases the company’s personality. When their clients should visit them, the company will appear ready for any situation from the client’s point of view, especially when the condition relates to the field.
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, a main disadvantage of
uniform
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 obligations for employees is the limitation on personal expression.
Staff
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 wouldn’t be comfortable
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 the limited clothing they are required to wear. In the future, it is dangerous to their employees’ performance. A
work
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uniform
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 is important for
jobs
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 that involve interacting with people and require adherence to
safety
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 and public policy standards.
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, construction workers need
uniforms
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 to ensure their
safety
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 and to easily identify them. Without their
uniform
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 set, they are at a huge risk to their
safety
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. Another job that requires
uniforms
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 is customer-facing roles in hospitals,
such
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 as doctors and nurses. People who are sick need their
staff
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's help, and it is easy to identify them because doctors' and nurses'
uniforms
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 are different. It
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 increases patients' trust. In conclusion,
work
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uniforms
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 offer benefits,
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 the drawbacks
also
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 exist, and they play an important role in
jobs
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 that involve significant risks and direct communication with people.

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task response
Improve task reply by giving a clear view on both sides and end with a clear line that states your view.
coherence
Make links between ideas with simple linking words. Start each paragraph with a clear line about what you will talk about.
content
There are good examples like firefighters and doctors.
structure
Intro and conclusion are present, so the shape is good.
Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional image
  • sense of pride
  • brand recognition
  • perceived status differences
  • individual expression
  • job satisfaction
  • customer-facing roles
  • retail, hospitality, healthcare
  • safety or protective gear
  • easy identification
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