Hi Madina,
Did you see the message from the manager? They are planning to.... ( Change, renovate, start ) I was over the moon -/I'm very sad - it was part of my daily routine. I think they should at least provide a temporary... It'd be cool if they improved... and added... Anyway, got any thoughts ?
Cheers,
Moydinovv
In the past, school lesson used the traditional method of teaching large of number of students in classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students do you advantages of using technology in schools outweight the disadvantages?
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