The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the percentage of cinema turnout across different age groups in Great Britain commencing from 1984, within a timespan of 16 years. From an
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perspective, there was an upward trend in cinema attendance across various age brackets.
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those aged 15-24 occupied the largest share in the given period, a reverse pattern could be seen for the 35-and-over-year-old. Of all age groups, people from 15 to 24 showed the highest participation rate, which more than tripled throughout the period (from about 17% to approximately 55%). Despite a steady increase in the first five years, the growth was accompanied by wild fluctuations after 2007. The figure for young customers aged from 7 to 14
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increased threefold from 10% in 2000 to over 30% in 2015, with a slight and uneven change before 2007 but a much faster rise after that. 25-35-year-old people and those above 35 did not show much attendance in cinemas in 2000 (less than 3%), but the percentage of the former had increased significantly with dramatic swings to over 30% by 2015,
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that of the latter did not have notable changes until 2010 and reached about 12% in 2015. Noticeably, cinema attendance of people from 25 to 35 has approached a similar level to that of the youngest customer group since 2007.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • anomaly
  • trend
  • pattern
  • attendance
  • cinema-goers
  • audience
  • peak
  • decline
  • increment
  • fluctuation
  • baseline
  • societal changes
  • technological advancements
  • external factors
  • economic conditions
  • home entertainment
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