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Computers and AI technology are increasingly used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development? (VMN)

With the apace development of technology, artificial intelligence
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been
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education
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. With the
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intervention
 of AI, on one hand, some
students
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 might experience a much joyful and easy learning time;
on the other hand
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,
this
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 may lead to various problems for
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 and other
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. Including AI
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 online
education
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 may have a positive effect. Nowadays, the number of schools that encourage
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 to include AI in their daily learning is growing steadily. Some experts pointed out that, with the help of AI,
students
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 are more willing to learn compared to those who are not allowed to use AI.
This
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students
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. By using AI,
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 can not only personalise their own learning methods,
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 can
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 provide detailed solutions to questions.
Moreover
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, encouraging
students
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 to use AI can
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 nourish their independent learning
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.
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, introducing AI into online
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 might affect
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 positively.
However
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, AI-intervention can
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 bring
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a negative
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 influence to
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 and
teachers
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. First of all,
although
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 AI has a powerful algorithm system, sometimes, it still
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 mistakes.
Students
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 may receive wrong information from AI
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 they are
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.
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, a certain
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 of
students
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 rely on AI too much. They ask AI for everything, including their homework, even exams.
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 may lead to academic dishonesty
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 and unfairness to
students
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 who do not use AI.
Thirdly
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,
teachers
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 may have a chance that they do not know how the
students
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 are processing
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the knowledge just by simply marking the homework, since the
students
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 could finish their homework with the help of AI.
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,
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 AI into
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online
education
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 may have a bad influence as well.
To conclude
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, using AI in online learning
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 have some positive effects for
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 to some extent.
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on
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students
 and
teachers
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. What we should do is to find a balance between including AI
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 and banning it thoroughly,
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students
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 can benefit the most from AI.

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Task response
Put a clear view in the first paragraph and keep it to the end.
Coherence
Make one idea in each paragraph and start with a topic sentence that shows the point.
Coherence
Link ideas with simple words like first, also, but, finally.
Examples
Use simple facts or small examples to show your point.
Grammar
Check spelling and grammar so the meaning is clear.
Organization
Keep to one main idea in each paragraph and avoid long, hard phrases.
Balance of ideas
There is a clear view that the topic has both good and bad sides.
Structure
The essay has a conclusion that restates the main idea.
Ideas
The writer tries to use examples to back points.
Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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