Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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many people consider that the present-day environmental crisis may

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the Earth, for a better planet for survival. But the current reliance on renewable and nuclear energy

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the opposite. I

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disagree

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statement and prove why it is not possible to look for another Universe for life support.

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, the major reason is dependent on clean energy. In recent

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everything has been relying on nuclear energy

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as e-bikes, electric cars. The

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usage

of fossil fuels has been reduced significantly,

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the carbon footprint.

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according to

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UNEP's recent data shows that in

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5 years the

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decarbonization

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decarbonization,

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the earth has been recovering from

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hazardous

gases.

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Jan 22, 2026

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Make a clear plan. Write an intro that says what you think. Then two body parts that show why, with one idea each. End with a short conclusion.

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Stick to one side. Make your view clear in one line and keep it in all your points.

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Add more simple proof. Use easy facts or tiny examples to back each idea.

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You show a clear choice on the topic.

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You begin to link energy topics to the idea of saving Earth.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

115 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental degradation
sustainable development
renewable energy
carbon footprint
biodiversity loss
climate change
greenhouse gases
deforestation
pollution
habitable planets
space colonization
terraforming
ethical dilemmas
resource allocation
technological advancements

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