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The line graph shows the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the
sales
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 of
gold
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 in
dubai
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Dubai
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 for twelve months in the year 2002 in
milions
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millions
 of dirhams.
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, Dubai
gold
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sales
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 in 2002 remained steady over the months.
Although
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 it showed a significant increase at the start of the period,
it is clear that
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 in March it followed with a sharp decline till
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July
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july
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july,
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then
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 it continued the same till the end of the period. In detail, it can be seen that the
sales
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 of
gold
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 started with 200
milions
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million
of
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dirhams in jan,
then
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is
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it
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 has increased slightly to just over 200
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milion
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million
 in feb.
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, there
were
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 a
dramatically
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 rise from
Feb
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February
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 to March and
as a result
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of
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that the
sales
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 of
gold
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 reached 350
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milion
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million
.
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, the growth that
happend
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happened
 in Mar did not
last
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 long as it was followed by a sharp decrease in April, May, June and July
and
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 the number of
gold
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sales
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 was just over 100
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milion
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million
.
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, even though there was a slight growth in
july
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July
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 till August at just 200
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milion
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million
, it
then
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 dropped to the same number in
july
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July
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, but it
rosen
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rose
 a bit and remained steady at just under 200
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milion
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million
 by the end of the period.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, gold, milion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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