The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, over a two-week period in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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bar presents the revenue of tickets on one airline company between two US states, Sydney and Melbourne, over a two-week period in 2013. measured in units of dollars

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