In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fee. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.What extend do you agree or disagree.

Some people think can receive
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free and others individual think for need to pay the money for
education
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,I strongly agree to provide
education
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to all level of members to help our member of community to owner free
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becouse on new generation no future to have job with out certificates ,The main reason to help people to learn to improved knowledge and use since on our life

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organization
Your view is clear. Add more detail: give 1-2 real reasons and an example to show your point.
grammar
Your grammar is often wrong. Check verb form and spelling and use simple, correct sentences.
coherence
Use simple linking words to connect ideas, like 'first', 'also', 'but', 'therefore'.
idea
You state you agree with free education.
content
You try to explain why free education is good for people.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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